Thank you once again for having me. I'm going on vacation. I'm taking the Domanski copies Mr. Tyler Haché recommended me. Hopefully I'll finish Persona 5 before class starts in four weeks. Thanks again to Tyler, Eddie Dust, Charlotte Simmons, and Heather Clark for lending their time and poetry to our blog, and for giving me a whole bunch of good stuff to take in (not pictured: Black Beauty, Tales of the City (2019), Wonder Boy: The Dragon's Trap, "Iron and the Soul," some sad sad music courtesy of Mr. Dust, Stations of the Left Hand, and Earthly Pages). And even though we couldn't work out something for Drue MacPherson and Ruby Poulette, thanks to them for coming out to STU back in March for their participation in the 2019 Annual Atlantic Undergraduate English Conference.
Be seeing you.
- Jamie Kitts, Managing Editor May 2018 - August 2019
JK: Tyler before we get into the important questions I'd like to open with an anecdote. It turns out that my father and I have both seen you perform, but in entirely different contexts. You and I met at the conference in March, of course, and I definitely heard your work at the 2018 conference, too. But my dad has seen you play music. My dad's the East Coast music journalist Bob Mersereau. A tweet of his from 2015 came up in my search feed of you performing at East Coast Music Week.
I bring this up because if you graduated this year, and that tweet is from April 2015, then that was only a short time before you would have started at Mount Allison, right?
TH: That is so cool that your father is Bob Mersereau. I have a lot of respect for the work he has done for the East Coast music scene! And that's right - I would have been studying at Université de Moncton at that point. Before transferring in January 2016, I studied music for a year and a half - I was taking Classical guitar and, briefly, the Baroque lute. My decision to take a different academic path and study English at Mount Allison University was spontaneous. Actually, one week before the winter term of my second year, I decided that I wanted to try something new. By the time I arrived in Sackville to register, almost all of the courses that I should have been taking were already filled, of course. That was an interesting transitional period; however, I knew that I had made the right decision. I was able to use my interest in music, and songwriting in particular, as a lens for which I would study literature. I am heading to the University of Toronto for an MA in Field of Creative Writing next year; I maintain a similar approach while writing poetry.
JK: I actually did not know that you had been an U de M student. So you were probably preparing for finals around that show.
TH: I would have indeed been preparing for finals around that time. For the first couple of years at university, I would try to get my studying done throughout the week so I could play shows on the weekend. I'm sure you can imagine this became harder to manage as school got busier. I still worked on my songwriting. Every three or four months when I was on Fall or Spring break I traveled to Nashville for co-writing and recording sessions.
JK: What was it about Mt. A that U de M didn't offer?
TH: I heard from a friend who had graduated from Mount Allison about the particular attention that the English program pays to historical groundwork. In second year, students take two mandatory courses that provide the foundation for this historical knowledge, tracing Anglo-Saxon poetry through to contemporary works. After taking these courses that combine history with writing methodology and conventions, students can really begin to identify their strengths and which areas they are interested in pursuing. I was drawn to the thoroughness of that approach. I was also drawn to the relative freedom that the program offers for pursuing personal literary interests. I was eventually able to design much of my course load around my interest in contemporary poetry and ecopoetics. In my third year, I took Mount Allison's year-long Creative Writing course where I began to take what I learned in these English courses and my experience songwriting and applied it to poetry writing.
English professors Dr. Geordie Miller, Dr. Deborah Wills, and Dr. Amanda Jernigan, each established creative writers in their own right, were always there to help when I was looking for writing advice. And I found that a lot of the general English courses that I took lent themselves particularly well to discussions about what it means to be a writer during this time, such as "Aspects of Postmodernism" and "Literature and the Natural World." There were also several readings and workshops hosted by 7 Mondays, a student-run literary journal for which I was an editor in my final year. The English department engaged student writers by inviting them to submit their work for awards, such as the Graham Atlantic Writing Prize and the Hazel Steeves Prize in Creative Writing.
JK: I actually have a copy of Dr. Jernigan's Years, Months, and Days in my shelf at home. I picked it up at the NB Book Awards back in May where she gave a guest lecture, though I'm afraid to say a lot of it was above me. I would have loved to be in one of her classes.
How did you get involved with 7 Mondays?
TH: I only became an editor for 7 Mondays in my final year. I read my first copy of the journal before attending the Mount Allison. When I got there I was eager to send in my work and eventually apply to be an editor. I think this speaks to the kind of symbiotic relationship there has been between contributors and editors; the journal, in its consistency and style, has earned the respect of many creative students who in turn want to participate.
JK: How long has it been going for?
TH: In fact, this past year, the journal celebrated its 25th year, which is quite a feat for a publication of this type. Thaddeus Holownia, an accomplished photographer and professor who served as the head of the Fine Arts Department at Mount Allison before retiring recently, helped immensely with this longevity; he worked on it with the students for over two decades.
JK: We used to have a student writing journal here at STU, but I'm given to understand it kept running into a problem where a senior student would bring it back, get an issue out, but never find a reliable way to keep momentum once they left. I think our last effort was in 2016 as part of a senior project class. I'd like to find a solution, especially where I'm coming back as a part-time student to complete a Certificate of Honours Standing this year. What do you think is key to maintaining a project like that after its senior student staff leave Mt. A?
TH: That's a great question. I am less equipped to answer this than Maia Herriot, James King, or Julia Crowell, who have each been editors for the journal since their earlier years studying at Mount Allison. Each year, the editorial board of 7 Mondays includes a couple of 1st or 2nd-year students to help with its continuation. The journal engages student writers as well as photographers; Mount Allison has its fair share of both and 7 Mondays serves as a consistent reflection of this work. The students of Mount Allison pay for the creation of the journal through a small fee added to their tuition. Alongside the support from the Mount Allison Students' Union, the Department of Fine Arts, and the Department of English, this fee helps to ensure a certain level of stability for the journal.
JK: As I'm writing to you, I've just wrapped up and posted my conversation with UNB Fredericton's Eddie Dust from that AAUEC panel. During our talk I asked him about his decision to pursue a PhD in creative writing, and I'm wondering about your grad school plans, too. Was the choice to enroll in a Master's program as spontaneous as the choice to transfer to Mt. A?
TH: In a way, it felt that spontaneous. It sounds less dramatic, though.
I came home from my creative writing class one day, late in my fourth year, and decided that was the path I wanted to take. I immediately made plans to meet with Dr. Wills to ask how I could best prepare for this. Most of my creative experience prior to that had been songwriting. I didn't feel that my poetry portfolio was substantial enough for me to apply for graduate school. But I knew this was what I wanted to do. I came to her just in time to put together a proposal to do a Creative Honours Thesis the following year. I instantly made the commitment to stay for the entire fifth year to get more experience researching and working in this area. I did have a lot of time to prepare, though it was still intense.
I've found that applying for graduate school is like adding an extra course or two to your workload, especially for a program like Creative Writing that requires you to craft a portfolio while also putting together all of the info and documentation. I'm so glad I did this fifth year. Not only did it give me enough time to really prepare for the application process, but it also gave me the space to immerse myself entirely in the kind of work that I want to continue doing even beyond graduate school. The year consisted of writing poetry and writing about poetry. A lot of my extra-curricular and social activities revolved around this path that I hadn't really realized just a year before. In hindsight, it makes total sense that this was the academic path I chose; the other day, I found several notebooks of strange, embarrassing song lyrics and other creative ideas that I wrote down when I was ten or so. I plan to bring those notebooks with me to Toronto.
JK: I also took five years for my degree. Outlines always seem so stone-set until you actually get your hands into their pliable clay.
I'd like to know about your home town, Berry Mills. You described it as a "liminal community." That's such a loaded word, especially in comparison to terms like "beautiful" which don't require much unpacking. What boundary does that place occupy?
TH: The term "liminal" actually serves as an example of convergence between my academic and creative interests. I use it to describe the sense of intermediacy in my home community - its state of constant transition and its unwillingness to be defined in any fixed sense. If you drive through Berry Mills today, you will encounter its rural quality through its farmhouses, commercial horse stables, and things like country restaurants. However, these stand alongside new homes and abandoned buildings. Berry Mills is located on the edge of Moncton and it feels as though the city limit line that separates country and city is blurred - Berry Mills epitomizes its own gradual transformation. However, this sense of an encroaching city center transforming a rural community can be complicated a bit.
The province's city centers also evoke a kind of rural quality, in some ways, or at least a small-town feeling that is quite distinct from the major city centers of each other province. I think the geographic instability of these liminal spaces like Berry Mills can serve as synecdoche for the province as a whole, and for other spaces going through similar kinds of transitions. Poetry serves as a useful method to explore these kinds of ideas, and to question the implications. In my poetry, I often draw on my surroundings in Berry Mills for symbols of this transition. Furthermore, we can try to reflect this instability through poetry with language and by playing with non-linearity. Right now, I am interested in the kind of gothic threshold of this blurred city limit line.
JK: In the bio you sent me, you said your thesis was a "diffuse interrogation of anthropocentric aspects of human consciousness." If I understood your AAUEC set well enough, there's an animal central to many human questions. Right at the front in "The Hulking Stove" there's the juxtaposition of a salmon caught versus a haddock bought, but just behind that is a changing family dynamic - a sense of tradition lost.
TH: Yes, that's right. There are similar comparisons between the plasticity of a fifth wheel and the authenticity of the old, decaying house. I am deeply interested in the relationship between tradition and progress. Certain traditions that seem to have been more common just a few generations ago around here also seem indicative of a stronger sense of human/non-human interconnection, or ecocentrism. The fifth-wheel camper, the store-bought fish, and the cold burner each evoke a superficiality or a shallowness - or at least that's what I was going for here. This is all complicated by the "hulking stove" itself, the massive and environmentally inefficient centerpiece of this old kitchen.
We shouldn't over-romanticize the past. Still, we shouldn't see it as simply behind us; we should always be questioning what it means to progress. The lyric speaker is presented as a poet trying to work through these questions, trying to write a kind of troubled elegy for this literal and metaphoric house.
JK: So when you say you're interested in the relationship between tradition and progress, is that purely as an idea you explore in writing or is that reflected in your daily living somehow?
TH: I'd like to think that this interest actually began in my daily living growing up and now comes out naturally in my poetry. One of the benefits of working on a creative writing thesis was being able to really reflect on the material that affected me throughout my degree and then having the space to apply this to my own writing, therefore enriching my experience of the material. This additional time allowed me to further develop my own critical perspective through what felt like a kind of dialogue between my own personal interests and my academic interests. It was in this last year that I truly felt like I was beginning to bridge the two. A professor that I admired at Mt. A would often quote William Faulkner in our American literature courses: "The past isn't dead. It isn't even past." It always seemed to serve as a kind of bleak history lesson, as it should. But over time, and especially in my fifth year, I began to resonate with this on a deeper level while writing about my home community, Berry Mills, for the first time.
This interest in the relationship between tradition and progress is reflected in my daily living. I have always been drawn to experiences that make me feel like I am part of something much larger, helping me to realize my relative insignificance; this realization always has a calming effect. Fly fishing does this for me. Over the past two summers, my father and I made a point to go to the Kennebecasis River once a week.
My interest in music comes from a similar place of tradition; music has been central to my family's culture and lineage. And on a more basic level, playing guitar or piano always requires a certain balance between what feels like instinct and intellect - muscle memory and study. I am drawn to poetry that evokes a similar balance. This is not to say that I think the relationship between tradition and progress simply parallels that between instinct and intellect. It can't be that simple, of course. But I am interested in these tensions, and how the past continues to inform our present in ways that we are not always to privy to.
JK: And are these ties to shared meaning part of the language of black bears?
TH: The black bear serves as a guiding metaphor throughout my collection of poems and honours thesis. The public discourse on black bears is paradoxical: they are often perceived as both a dangerous predator and a victim of human development and climate change. I use this metaphor in my writing to provoke empathy in difficult circumstances. It also helps to reflect a central tension in my poems: the lyric speaker strives for a lost sense of interconnection with the natural world while still confronting the teleological effects of climate change. The juxtaposition of the black bear helps to present a kind of dissonance that the speaker feels. However, in poems like "The Hulking Stove," where the bear is not mentioned, my hope is that a similar sense of dissonance will come through, and perhaps, when these poems are read together, there will be a sense that this bear is always present, though often hidden. More broadly, "the language of black bears" refers to my attempt to write in a style that reflects these tensions between instinct and intellect.
JK: Tyler thank you so much for taking the time to speak with me as you're getting ready to move to Toronto.
TH: Thanks for your interest in my work and for asking these great questions! I really enjoyed this conversation.
JK: I'm getting everyone who participated in this series to help grow my shelves at home. What good thing should more people have?
TH: I have to recommend Don Domanski's Stations of the Left Hand. Or, his Earthly Pages, which includes selections from his previous books. The accompanying essay "Flying Over Language," the afterword of Earthly Pages, is excellent, too.
JK: Where can people find your work?
TH: Right now, you can find my work in vol. 40/41 of The Nashwaak Review, vol. 14 of Atlantic International Studies Journal, and vol. 24 and 25 of 7 Mondays. If interested, find my music on Spotify or on YouTube: https://youtu.be/EkpSBJaod-s.
I've studied the hulking stove, the iron antique centerpiece
of a now caving kitchen floor. And I’ve imagined the heat;
I haven’t felt its smother and I won’t fix it
but still I sweat at this old dining table as I try to craft a vivid
past from a white rusting chair – this is what I can do.
We’ve returned to the Bay of Chaleur.
My family cooks store-bought haddock outside a fifth wheel.
They’ve said goodbye to this degenerate home already.
I stay seated and though they call for me,
I am entranced by the newspaper that aligns the cabinets
and the shoreline on the edge of my view. The dates don’t matter,
I just need to think of you walking up the lane with fresh salmon,
caught and battered by your hands to grasp what we share
before I leave. But instead I wrap my hands around the
spring handle and I press my careless palm on the burner – this is where
I feel an honest connection: the cruel coldness of metal
and the slow abandonment of a warmth
Used with permission of the author.
This is Part 2 of ACPA Managing Editor Jamie Kitts's talk with UNB Fredericton poet Eddie Dust. Click here to read Part 1.
JK: Could you expand on that "polar" idea? I've never heard it in such terms and I'm deeply curious.
ED: Before I go into this, I want to stress how happy I am that I get to think about, then write this reply down and not answer this live. Fuck up a question like this one and find yourself a fly undone. Because holy shit, the more I thought about the term “polar", the more I found issues to contend with. I don’t envision this term “polar" as encompassing anyone but me. Others can use it or point out its merits or (especially) its flaws as they like.
Anyway, “polar" is a term I’m kinda trying on for size, let’s say. And by polar, I mean in terms of magnetic polarity, I suppose. You might describe me as fairly stereotypically masculine. While I have spent a long time in academia, I’ve also spent a lot of time working construction, security, house painting, and other low level blue collar work. I’m pretty rough around the edges. I swear like a motherfucker, as I’ve said previously. And I’m a fight more than flight, except perhaps emotionally. You could call me a Mediocre Will Hunting.
I tend to be attracted to the opposite of me, physically speaking. I’m not attracted to the traditional masculine form at all, which is why I’d call myself polar male, or perhaps polar masculine?
I dunno. The term “masculine” is a tricky one, too. If feminine and masculine didn’t carry so much baggage (consider “effeminate”, for instance) and if there was more diversity in what roles a person might play, then a man who described themselves as feminine wouldn’t get mocked, nor would a woman who described herself as masculine.
The more I think on it, the more problematic all gender terms become…
In fact I’ll be honest, I wouldn’t exactly miss gender terms. I mean, have I really clarified anything with polar or have I just added more rope to the knot? Fucked if I know, buddy. Fucked if I know. I’m starting to think gender terms are a Gordian knot that cannot be disentangled but must rather be hacked in half and cast aside.
A friend of mine came out to me as non-binary not too long ago. I was really honoured, you know? Someone whom I’d known only a short while, someone who knew who they were but was still a little unsure on whether the world would accept them was willing to risk being very vulnerable with me because they trusted me. That’s kind of humbling, and it’s also a responsibility (I believe it’s a responsibility - a fucking duty carved more deeply into the stone of my soul than a commandment - not to take advantage of another’s vulnerabilities. Well… except in cards, so to speak). Anyway, we got talking about the nuts & bolts of our own personal preferences and they put it pretty bluntly:
“I’m attracted to female genitalia.”
At first I felt a little tripped up but quickly I came to realize it’s a really simple and most importantly clear response. Not a lot of people would be comfortable giving or receiving an answer like that. But with my friend in mind, all I can say is, so far at least:
All that said, whether or not I’m attracted to a person has nothing to do with which gender pronouns (or non-gendered ones) they choose to use. I go by he/him, though I could easily be convinced to switch to “they/their” out of solidarity with those who don’t get the choice. I’ve been attracted to people who use the “they/them/their” combo as well as “she/her". A prof once asked whether we’d date someone who went by “they/them/their”. It seems almost a silly question, but there definitely are people who attach that much weight to the pronouns we use.
You could envision it as
Polar Male < > Non-Binary < > Polar Female
With all the infinite variations and waves that emerge from that magnetic bar. Look at a picture of a magnetic field around a magnetized rod - it’s looping arcs, not straight lines. I think gender and sexuality can be the same way. You could recreate the LGBTQ+ rainbow as magnetic waves - I think that could be an interesting image.
It does get complicated because of course people are complicated. Can there be masculine gay men? Without question: go to the gym, join the army, train in a martial art, become a firefighter or a cop or even, yes, a lumberjack (leaping from tree to tree as they float down the mighty rivers of New Brunswick…). Would I call them polar male? I think so, yeah. Do they need to be tops? Unlikely, but who knows! It’s a developing concept and anyone who wanted to chime in with support, criticism, or their own terms would be welcome to do so. Sex is a spectrum and gender is too. And the heart wants what the heart wants.
I guess finally the trick is to create a term that is as inclusive as possible and isn't disparaging to anyone. That’s my main concern. I guess that’s why I would say “polar” male rather than “masculine”. And I suppose the more I think on it the more “polar" seems to be encompassing a lot more than sexuality, and perhaps not sexuality at all.
I’m not fully completely on it. Hell, I find I’m right fucking ambivalent. Being bipolar, that’s hardly surprising, of course.
JK: Somewhere I remember hearing that "they" came about because it was one person declaring it as their unique identity, that others who knew a similar truth about themselves need not necessarily emulate them, and instead seek out their own. I have no idea if this memory has legs - I could easily be misremembering and conflating conversations from people much more gender-versed than I.
But to finally turn to your poetry - the stuff you read at the AAUEC - relationships figure heavily into two thirds of the material. "The Past Due" is built on an excerpt from Eliot's "Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" and of course there's your "Love Poem 1." To me, it seems there's something decidedly postmodern about them. And maybe that word only came to mind because you lifted from one of the definitive modernists for a glosa, but on the other hand both "Past Due" and "Love Poem 1" have that arresting honesty that good postmodernism should have (that is, not to be experimental for the sake of shock or impenetrability but to challenge the work deemed challenging (I could also be talking right out of my ass here)). I feel as though "Past Due" actually takes Prufrock to task in a way by drawing out the intensity of something so common as fucking up a meal with someone rather than spending the energy in a way which prefigures Caulfield (watch as I dance around calling Eliot and Salinger incels). Or, to strip away all this essay-like jargon and get to the point, "Past Due" reveals the banal facts of romance while maintaining its integrity where "Prufrock" seethes in toxic ideation.
ED: "The Past Due" was an assignment I had for a course called “Food, Glorious Food”. We had to write a glosa based around food, although our reach was expanded to include recipes and food reviews in terms of the material we might draw from. I eventually settled on "Prufrock", one of my favourite poems (one of nearly everyone’s favourite poems, to be fair).
Prufrock is a sad, lonely, and hateful coward - a proto-incel as you suggest. Though he is ostensibly speaking to an other in the poem, I often think Prufrock is talking to himself. It’s more an internal monologue than a conversation, really. The repetition (“There will be time”) suggests something stream-of-consciousness, like he’s caught in an inescapable loop of his own insecurities.
When you’re mostly alone, you find ways to hate "the herd”. And unfortunately there are always and everywhere predators looking for lonely and isolated people to weaponize or con. That’s how white supremacy takes hold - you look for a “family” and a “family” finds you - a group of people who tell you that no, you’re not the asshole here, it’s everyone else, or it’s some specific race, religion, gender, political party, or sexuality that’s evil, that’s denying you your rightful X.
But no one deserves anything. You don’t get what’s coming to you, you only get what’s coming.
With my glosa, I wanted to write something from the POV of a person sharing with their partner the delicious horror of a spoiling fridge. I was simultaneously taking a course in Victorian literature and I imagine some of the language seeped into the poem. It’s all very tongue-in-cheek, of course, which "Prufrock" most assuredly isn’t. I did want to write the most sinister poem ever conceived about leftovers, and while I don’t suppose I have a lot of competition, I like to think I succeeded. I think Eliot would HATE having arguably the most important poem of the 20th century turned into an incredibly sarcastic look at leftovers. But fuck that anti-semite anyhow, genius or no. There’s a certain hubristic joy one takes in tweaking the noses of past masters.
A part of me certainly wanted to refute Prufrock’s pathetic worldview. Prufrock both idealizes and mocks relationships: “In the room the women come and go / Talking of Michelangelo”, whereas “The Past Due” is in essence a conversation with a partner in what I imagined to be a healthy, mature relationship between two equally devilish souls, like Screwtape asking his nephew what’s in the fridge for supper. Prufrock is as well in many senses speaking of dying whereas with "The Past Due" the conversation is about resurrection (or more accurately reanimation). I wanted to deny the idea that there is always time - not with leftovers, there ain’t! Prufrock is powerless except that he can delay… for awhile. "The Past Due" is all about glorious, silly power except over time. Prufrock is about indecision - the only power one has over time is to seize or deny the moment, and Prufrock inevitably chooses the latter. "The Past Due" is about action. Plus with "Prufrock" there is as you say this over-the-top rhetoric for a relatively staid life. In that at least I stuck to the script. Fuck mere overboard; I wanted to drown at the very bottom of the ocean, swallowing into my lungs water that the sun has never seen!
This glosa was the moment I really fell in love with poetry as an act rather than as a subject. The language oozes and drips with sarcastic menace, and I laughed over every line. With Prufrock’s opening four lines I found myself flung into the worlds of Dr. Moreau, Dr. Frankenstein, Dr. Jekyll - all the dystopia lunatics and mad scientists of the previous century’s turn. It was an act of fuckin' joy. The image of a patient etherized on a table brought Frankenstein’s creature into focus, and from there, well… the rest kind of fell into place.
Quick aside: people have no fucking appreciation of how long it takes to write and edit a poem. They throw down the first thing their brain farts out and consider that enough. It’s like Wordsworth claiming poetry is an entirely spontaneous act - what a fucking asshole! Yeah, Wordsworth, you thought in rhyme. Douchebag. Anyway I probably put 14 hours into this fucking glosa, at least. That’s like 20 minutes per line. And each excruciating minute was still somehow bliss. If my long-winded answer on “polar male” didn’t give it away, I will excoriate myself over each and every word. Anything less and you ain’t a poet. That shit matters. It matters all the way down.
As to whether or not the poem is postmodern, I don’t really think about that. It’s up to critics to label my poems, and hopefully read a lot more good stuff into them than ever I intended. If I’m postmodern it isn’t a conscious decision. I write however the fuck I feel, which I suppose is postmodern. But am I intentionally rocking the boat or am I hoping to be recognized as some bête noire or some deconstructionist enfant terrible? No(n). I’m just Eddie Dust. I write what I like. I will say I like to combine the rough with the smooth in terms of language and delivery. I like combining the hard and the soft, the elegant and the profane, the high and the low.
"Love Poem 1" is a different beast entirely. It was my first love poem (hence the title). The one thing I knew was that I didn’t want to go and look at what others had or were doing with their love poems. I wanted my first one to be entirely me. I figured I’d start out with a typical construction, “I love you more than X loves Y”. I realized I was heading for a train wreck with that hackneyed form and so I leapt off as soon as I could and into my own thing.
"Love Poem 1" is imagined from the POV of someone who is looking at their partner in bed, thinking of all the things they wish they could say but lack the ability due to fear of embarrassment or a typical male fear of vulnerability. Coming from a pretty rough background as I do, I used to find it very difficult to express my softer feelings. I find it easier now, but only with very specific people. I’m still pretty stoical and tend to hide my emotions except for rage (which is one of the few emotions men are allowed to display). The lines “I wish I could say these things to you / straight-faced, my delivery / straight-laced, / as perfect as pointe shoes” represent how hard it can be for men raised in toxic environments to display their more vulnerable feelings. Most of the time when I would want to say something that might leave me vulnerable I would stuff a sarcastic or (hopefully) witty comment somewhere in the mix as a way of reducing the impact of what I was saying and thus reducing the potential to be hurt were I rejected. Men who come from hard backgrounds still want to think soft thoughts. But we can end up hating ourselves for such “weakness” - it’s a knee-jerk response that winds up kicking us in our own balls somehow.
As for “The Sandman”, I was coming off “The Past Due” high and I continued the horror element through into this poem. I wanted to create a kind of “In the Hall of the Mountain King” vibe, where the reader via the poem’s structure and word choice naturally finds themselves speeding up as they read. It was a challenge to memorize and perform and I figured if I could pull off “The Sandman” without fucking it up or passing out, I’d earn major props. High risk/high reward is kind of my thing. Again, I’m 43 and just starting out in a career that takes years and years to develop. I can’t afford to fight defensively.
JK: What I really admire about these poems is how much of a nightmare you create out of the mundane - or rather, the nightmare you reveal. Even without the context of your background I think they speak to a common experience that is culturally trivialized: the deep psychological catastrophe which unfolds as insecurity.
ED: A certain skewing of vision can make anything horrific. I think of the song “Sliver” by Nirvana - it’s a pile of nothing with vaguely infantile lyrics that don’t mean shit. But because of the dark and desperate tone of the song I can’t help but imagine something terrible happened to the kid while they were asleep, something unspeakable. Something that has happened before.
At the other end, you have Beck’s “Girl” which is a beach rock inspired song about a serial killer. Same with “My Valuable Hunting Knife” by Guided by Voices - a kind of fun, pop rock sounding song yet again about a serial killer.
JK: But why exactly do you memorize your work? What would be lost if you read it from a page?
ED: Look, poetry IS a performance art, as is most art. It always has been this way. I think it’s us poets who’ve forgotten that. Musicians understand this. Leonard Cohen understood this probably best of all.
It’s more important now than ever to have a performative aspect to one’s work. There’s too much fucking competition to just sit back and hope your work gets noticed amongst the skyscraper piles of other hopefuls teetering on the edges of every agent’s desk. Fish may swim in schools for protection, but an artist needs to be the fish that gets caught.
And I was pretty certain no one else would memorize their work. And no one else had. This let me peacock a little.
Now all that said, it certainly is possible I fucked up my performance and everyone walked away thinking, “Jesus, what a Dead Poet wannabe.” But I don’t think so. And even if so, who cares. After all, one day I’m going to die.
So I say: throw your life at your audience!
I mean, what the hell else am I to do, stand on a proverbial corner with my pamphlets thick and slipping from an ever-weakening grip, sneaking papers sheepishly into whatever hands are open enough to receive them, watching all that paper then fall from disinterested fingers into garbage bins, onto sidewalks, gutter gathered; or crumpled, or wiping asses, or holding notes and grocery lists in the margins, the margins the only parts getting read…
Nah, fuck that. Scream it in their faces if you must.
But there is also intellectual value in memorizing one’s poems. You become intimately aware of each and every word. You can find the rough spots more easily. You must contend with sound and rhythm more deeply than you else wise might - it’s right there gliding, grinding, stumbling, or outright falling from your face, after all.
That said, I made major changes to "Love Poem 1” the night before my recitation and re-memorizing the poem was a miserable bugger, especially when changes involved a word here or there.
JK: Eddie to wind this down I've got a couple things on my mind and then I'll let you go. Like you, I'm always looking for something to read or hear or whatever. But I'm more looking for someone to put something in my hands and tell me bug-eyed and breathless "READ THIS." I'm getting everyone I talk with to send me out and buy something for my shelves, and I legit don't care what genre or form it is. What should I run out and grab now? (Well, not now; it's like midnight as I write this and I'm not super sold on burglary.)
ED: I dunno. Lately I’ve been reading Lunch Poems by Frank O’Hara - a prof recommended him to me and I admit I like his lines and contours. The one book I return to over and over is Notes from Underground by Dostoyevsky. His monster works are a little too preachy for me, but Notes is just pure bitter delight.
But if you want to really know what it was like to be a younger me and what it’s like to be me now, read “Iron and the Soul” by Henry Rollins. Here’s a link, it’s not long. The version I linked is cleaned up a lot from the original - in the original Rollins uses profanity, along with some awful slurs that were commonly used when he was a kid, but are anathema now. Rollins has always been a staunch defender of LGBTQ rights, but the language of the 80s was repellent, especially towards LGBTQ. You don’t quote Mishima Yukio if you’re anti-LGBTQ. That said, I’m ambivalent about the cleaned up text - did Rollins rewrite it or did the website? Knowing Rollins, it’s almost assuredly the website. Is it a disservice not to point out the language Rollins grew up around?
I don’t know.
Yes and no.
I don’t fucking know...
Anyway, the slurs were distracting from the intended message, which is Rollins' broad definition of what it means to be fully strong through the lens of weightlifting, yet encompassing so much more than mere physical strength. I lift myself as a form of meditation - it’s hard to think about anything else when you have to concentrate on form, speed, breath, weight, rhythm, and control. I lift to keep my brain in check. It’s made me strong but it’s also instilled a strange humility - the weights tell YOU what you can lift. Maybe today your numbers will go down because you’re tired or hungover or a little sick or what-have-you. You don’t arrogantly shove your numbers up - that’s a great way to destroy your body. You submit to the weights, submit to the whims of the day. You must approach weights with humility, or you will end up with a compacted spine, duck walking because of your fucked up knees, all your joints wrecked and aching.
Stupid and vain and childish.
Read "Iron and the Soul." It’ll give you a rough idea of who I am and how I think.
JK: Last thing - maybe you saw this one coming. You recently underwent a name change. What's the significance in the name Eddie Dust?
ED: I’ve wanted to change my name since I was in my early twenties, but I didn’t want to change my name unless I had also changed myself significantly enough that the name change was warranted. So long as I was an angry, lonely, and bitter person, there was no point. I wore the name of my dad, John Urechko (I’d call him a piece of shit but he’s much more than just a piece) because I was still despicably his kind. No, not nearly as cruel nor misogynistic, but in my way just as lost and bitter and hateful.
But I knew I wanted the change.
I thought of all sorts of names, each more pretentious and 16 year old goth than the last. Hell, I even briefly considered fucking “Damien” - that’s a name you better be born into. I had for a long time settled on the name Alun Walker - Alun Wanderer was very, very briefly tempting, remembering The Black Cauldron and Taran Wanderer. It still kinda stunk to me, of what I couldn’t quite name.
Then one night sometime past the witching hour while contemplating not contemplating suicide, the name “Edelmar Dust” popped into my head. I have no idea why or from where. I do remember giving my head a fucking shake.
“Edelmar? That can’t be a name.”
I looked it up and sure enough, it is indeed a name and it means “noble”. Immediately my mind went to my favourite play: Hamlet.
“To what base uses we may return, Horatio. Why, may not imagination trace the noble dust of Alexander till he find it stopping a bunghole?"
I knew I had my name.
Of course, I had two conflicting reasons for liking the name. On the one hand, it is a hopeful thing to imagine oneself containing some mote of the greatness of those who’ve come and gone before. After all, who can know the capricious tastes of genius and talent? It does not settle upon any specific shoulders, despite what the bigots of the world will claim. There’s no such thing as fucking midichlorians. Brilliance is not determined by melanin nor pedigree nor - despite the way many pubescent, pathetic little man-boys act - is genius gathered in the prick. It goes where it likes without concern for our concerns. We don’t have a long line of Einsteins discovering some new generation changing science. We had Albert. Genius isn’t genetic. It’s of the soul, whatever the fuck that is.
In short, I hope some of the noble dust of our species has settled in me.
And on the other hand, the host of Alexander’s proverbial spirit may be plugging the casks of literal spirits. We don’t get to say what happens to ourselves once those parts of us leave the nest. What you write will be reinterpreted according to other people’s prejudices, preferences, and plots. Who knows what will gnaw at our bones?
Maybe when I die no one will care. Maybe I’ll fade into dust entirely, unloved and unrecognized. Maybe I’ll be such a failure as an artist I’ll find myself writing plots for pornos - not that there’s anything wrong with pornography or prostitution so long as safety and consent are constantly at the forefront, but the storylines are ass… I mean, so to speak… well, I guess it depends on the genre. ANYWAY the point is that I could end up a big pile of nothing. Well… that’s actually inevitable, isn’t it?
My lineage is dust. I don’t value either side of my family. I have a mother and a sister and they I love. That’s fuckin’ it. The rest of my so-called relatives can burn in the darkness visible for all I give a fuck. In fact for some of them I’d put in a fucking request to the Devil to give them extra special attention. Or to give me a go. Even now I could teach Old Scratch a thing about hate.
Thinking on my "family" always opens up the violent highways in me…
Anyway, Edelmar stuck around for awhile, but ultimately Eddie emerged from it. Edelmar is too pretentious even for me. Although I still consider myself an “Edelmar" Eddie and not an "Edward” Eddie.
It’s been good for me so far. I was surprised by how easy it was to get used to the new name. I suppose it’s partly because of how much I needed to discard my old self. Thankfully those I’ve met at UNB have been incredibly accepting. No one ever said to me, “Well, until your name change is official I’m going to call you by your “real” name. I said I was Eddie, they accepted me as Eddie. It’s part of the reason I respect Gen Z - at least with those I know, I am who I say I am.
Makes me think of all the bullshit over gender pronouns again. It’s not up to me to decide who YOU are. It’s up to you to tell ME who you are, and it’s up to me to ACCEPT what you tell me. Seriously, what kind of a lazy homophobe do you have to be not to ask the simple question, “Which pronouns do you prefer?” It’s such a small goddamned thing yet people act like they’re getting castrated over having to use “they” and “their”. GROW UP, fuck.
If you said to me, “You know what? I don’t think you’re an Eddie. You were born Allan, so you have to stay that way.”
You can expect to lose teeth. Metaphorically.
Ah, that violent imagery… you never escape the labyrinth of toxic masculinity, not totally. It’s a pair of old clothes you carefully fold and put away at the back of your wardrobe. But there always seems to be an occasion to pull them back out, and they always fitcha so well…
Anyway, in terms of practicality, Eddie Dust is a useful name. It’s easy as fuck to remember, especially compared to Urechko. Can you guess how to pronounce Urechko? You’re almost assuredly wrong. I once had a teacher pronounce it Urko.
Let us go then, you and I,
When the evening is spread out against the sky
Like a patient etherized upon a table;
Let us go, through certain half-deserted streets
- TS Eliot, “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock
Let us go then, you and I, and
stand ambivalent before the two-faced door that
hides from eyes our slow congealing meals.
Let us raid this cold-hearted Narnia within whose
wintry barrows await the wights of countless
gluttonous nights. Let us ponder the strange terrain with
outstretched arms that weave and wend down
fragile channels, past rusted sediments of vinaigrettes,
past the snagging brambles of immortal condiments and
other illegible, foodish impediments.
When the evening is spread out against the sky
before the cold door ajar we shall frigidly linger,
running fingers across the lid of a composted
compote at whose undated Fate for a scance
we will wonder. We will wander through
the tombs of unknown soldiers and
exhume from their clear coffins a wealth of
tarnished medallions, again to solve with fresh
autopsies the fork-rent flesh as it lays cold and
glazed upon the white-wired shelves
like a patient etherized upon a table.
Beneath the touch of lingering fingers and stainless
implements only fine for this kind of cureless charcuterie
let us create new life from old as did our dear Doctor
Frankenstein, who from the limbs of severed villains
sprang forth a fresh monstrosity. We will recombine
the unraveling DNA; we will cross species. We will blur
the boundaries of recipes, obscure their purity,
merge lineages, following in the footsteps of the
Darwin-conquering Moreau and his unfettered ilk.
Let us go through certain half-deserted streets,
and kidnap from cupboard homes iron maidens to
whose thorny wombs will go condemned our gruesome
stew. We will burn these Dutch witches above or
beneath the black spiralled iron and the pure electric heat.
We will burn away their sins with hellfire, we will
flay their soles. Then at the last we will
pour free our reforged feast from the
spattered metal that failed to contain it and
gorge ourselves, renewed by the past due.
Used with permission of the author.
*Editor's note: This conversation between myself and Mr. Dust covered a lot of ground. I could cut it down, but I'd rather leave as much in as possible. Before we got to the meat, Eddie said to me, "I ain't one for leaving my skeletons in my closet… there are a fuckload of other males going through that same Hell. Maybe something we dig up between us can help." So this one will be posted in two parts. I've cut a little bit out, moved around a few paragraphs, but this is pretty much all of it.
JK: So Eddie, you've performed remarkably well during your undergrad at UNB, but this is not your first degree. What's been different about this go around?
ED: Jesus, what isn’t...?
The first time through, I really was just using university as a way of avoiding the so-called “real world”. Due to my undiagnosed bipolar 2 and PTSD from an extremely abusive childhood (what a fucking combo…) I couldn’t much function outside of academia. But simultaneously due to my issues I couldn’t really effectively attend class. My grades were either As or Fs (due to incompletion). Took me 7 fucking years to get a 3 year general Arts degree.
This second time around I know what I want. I want my PhD in English. I want to be a writer - theatre, screenplays, poetry, short stories, novels, goddamned greeting cards and bathroom stall graffiti… to quote Lennon: “You give me a fucking tuba, I’ll get something out of it.” (NB: Lennon was a sleazy misogynist and I think he was a douchebag) I’m not here avoiding life; I’m here to hone my skills so I can better participate in life.
Partly I’m older (43), and that takes away a lot of pressures. Profs give me leeway they wouldn’t necessarily give a younger student. And I’m not intimidated by professors at all, which makes it very easy to get to know them as people. And no matter how stressful school gets, I’ve been through way, way worse.
All that said I nearly fucked the whole thing up. When my cat Monkey died last September (for a cat he was a klutz, hence the name) I totally fell apart. I missed almost two weeks of classes. Thankfully I out-and-out told my profs what was wrong. They gave me extensions, notes, whatever I needed. They directed me to counselling services at the University of New Brunswick and there I got my diagnoses and my lithium prescription. Two profs even offered to walk me there. Since then my moods have been much more stable.
Once the wreckage of my traitor brain got swept away, I was able to finally function for relatively long stretches of time. Once mountains now molehills, I suppose.
Think of it this way - let’s say you spent your whole life wearing heavy weights on your limbs. Then one day the weights come off. How fucking strong are you now that you are no longer held down?
Ultimately though, I have to say it’s because of the human connections I’ve made. The professors of the UNB English department are absolutely above and beyond. They saw to it I got the help I needed. The university made sure I was taken care of. The resources were available to me. And the friends that I made here accepted me for who I was (Aside: I really like Gen Z - they’re anxious as fuck, sure, and often socially awkward, but they have far more compassion and acceptance than any generation before them. Those I know are socially aware and political AF. They’re pessimistic but not cynical. That’s an impressive combo).
All that I had going for me is in truth a sign of unbelievable luck, when you think about it. Were I an American I’d probably have shot myself decades ago… makes the soul curdle to think of all those who don’t have access to the kind of compassion, understanding, and mental health resources I do, don’t it?
JK: I'll tell you what though about Gen Z: I'm four years older than this year's grad class and even that difference really shows. The kids I grew up with- we were cynical. I had to learn this compassion thing from the people I met in uni. You're right though, they're a good bunch. They call BS and demand better in the places that count, and they accept someone's shit because they're dying to scream about their own.
You ever listen to A Perfect Circle? They did a cover album like 15 years ago with this funeral-march version of "Imagine" on track 2. I always thought it was a more honest take on Lennon.
ED: I know A Perfect Circle well. I’ve been a fan of Maynard since Opiate. “Judith” and “3 Libras” are probably my favourite of APC. As for Tool, Jesus… probably “Prison Sex” is the song I come back to most, although “Bottom” and “4 Degrees” both hold a lot of love in my heart. There’s too much to choose from but mostly I like their angrier stuff. Someone described listening to Tool as falling down a rabbit hole and I have to agree. I met a guy who went to one of their concerts. I wanted to eat his eyes and ears in the hopes I might absorb what he saw and heard.
JK: First time I really listened to Mer de Noms I was on the city bus for my morning commute. "Judith" hit and I immediately knew public was not the right place to hear that the first time because it was just so much and I had to keep everything I was feeling locked in. As much as I love that album, I'm more about Thirteenth Step. MJK does things with his mouth on that album (like the way he says "Dig into the" on "Weak and Powerless") that have stayed burned into me like a memory you can't lock. But it's the ambiance that I keep returning for.
Anyway, I get your weights analogy. I've had depression for a decade now and I finally got it squared away with the right drugs and people.
ED: Depression is a total bitch. I liken bipolar, bipolar 2, and depression to heaven and Hell. When you’re bipolar 1, you go all the way into heaven, and all the way into Hell, though BP1 don’t spend much time in perdition compared to the others. They get to talk to god. Hallucinations are extremely common. Lots and lots of the homeless are bipolar 1. Bipolar 2, you get to visit the parking lot of heaven. You get to have a huge party like the parking lot at the Super Bowl. It’s fun times but you don’t see angels. You don’t get to go past the pearly gates, but you can still hear the music coming from within. You can see a little through the bars.
Depressives never get to see heaven. But you sure know Hell.
Bipolar 2s spend about 50% of our time with you, in Hell. We’re 15x more likely to kill ourselves than the general population. When you’re really, really depressed, you don’t even have the energy to die. When you’re both manic and depressed (called a mixed state) you have the energy, the drive, and the desire to kill yourself. So it’s very, very dangerous to be bipolar. Bipolar 1s have it the worst of us all, in truth - they go totally pie-in-the-sky manic and leave a trail of wreckage behind them - sexual promiscuity and extreme risk-taking is part of mania. And a depressive episode often follows the mania.
At least the mania is awesome.
I don’t envy you your depression. I go up and down like a motherfucker but I at least go way up. When you’re hypomanic, you’re Odysseus and Achilles combined.
While I don’t get those highs anymore, I still go higher than most people. And I still go low, but compared to the suicidal days, it’s a goddamned breeze. I don’t mind a winding road, so long as there’s rails. Plus I know it’ll end.
But depression eats you up. It’s pure exhaustion. It’s a feeding leech. And it doesn’t necessarily end this side of the shovel.
As a fun aside, the etymology of “happy” is telling. It comes from the word “hap” which means “lucky”. I don’t need to explain that, do I.
JK: I'll give you a taste of a depressive's heaven: other people - the moments where you can totally share yourself with someone else. Not in a romantic or sexual sense - though those are fulfilling for their own reasons, some related - but a moment when you can be fully present with company, make them laugh, give yourself fully to what they're saying and doing without having to make an effort, without it being a heavy moment. Maybe just making a lousy meal together with the best intentions in the cabinet, or riffing back and forth on each other's nonsense. Being alone and not fucked up is bliss, but being with others like you've never been fucked up is heaven. Living, and being exhausted from it - emptied instead of empty: that's a depressive's heaven. Or at least it's mine, because it's in spite of condition but not absent from it; it requires a break from the isolation. The condition doesn't bring you into heaven like mania, but it makes even a sample euphoric. So no, you really don't need to explain "hap."
ED: I definitely agree - it’s our interconnectedness that keeps life worth living. It’s isolation that leads to a broken soul. Life really is about other people. Sartre was only half-right when he said Hell is other people. So’s heaven. So’s everything.
Doesn’t that make “the pursuit of happiness” a dumb idea? You’re pursuing something only achievable by luck! Go for fulfillment. Happiness is only going to get you killed when you realize it doesn’t actually exist outside of the past. You can only have been happy.
JK: As it turns out, yeah, I've just been thinking about the pursuit of happiness. I was seeing a counselling therapist to help clear some shit recently, and she told me on our first meeting, "So I don't usually suggest this but have you ever read any Slavoj Žižek?" I don't know if it was my unkempt beard or what, but I don't know what about me says "I bet that guy has read structural theory or could highly benefit from it." Anyway she sent me home with a prescription for Violence, The Pervert's Guide to Ideology, and some Youtube links including his 2-minute appeal to being interesting instead of happy. Factor in this root of luck in happiness and yes, I can definitely see happiness as something absurd.
ED: I’ll check out Slavoj Žižek - I’m always looking for something to read.
I don’t think I’ve ever been happy. But I’ve certainly felt fulfilled, and that beats even bliss any day.
In my rarely humbly expressed opinion - whatever your current or past goals, pursuing them solely for the hope of happiness I think has dangerous potential to totally blow up in your face. You might achieve your goals and find you’re no happier. God knows I’ve found that out the hard way, over and over and over some more.
Look at all the famous people who still kill themselves. Heath Ledger was at the absolute pinnacle of his career. Famous beyond understanding. Handsome, talented, beloved.
Still killed himself.
There’s things our society has either failed or refused to acknowledge - that materialism and ladder climbing is an unfulfilling, Sisyphean existence. That the zero-sum game is a pile of divisive, hateful bullshit. That our society is a hoarder’s society. You look at stores overflowing with perishable merchandise… you look at how much we throw out… you look at the depression and anxiety rates, which are soaring even as life gets supposedly better with every passing decade, even in the face of constant growth… it's like some malignant tumor of which we’ve grown fond… and all of this nonsense is predicated on the idea that that sweet, sexy jacket coming out this fall is going to make you happy or act as a lure to snag a bit of happiness on your hook.
And it’s all horse shit.
Although it is a really nice jacket...
We’re definitely missing some kind of soul work. Religion just isn’t doing it anymore - too many questions, too many unanswered, too little evidence, too many monsters locked up in priestly frocks instead of prison cells. There’s some nebulous amalgamation of one’s thoughts and beliefs and experiences I think of as a soul - the essence of a person so to speak. That thing, whatever it is, needs exploration and we have no trustworthy guides. Where’s a reliable psychopomp, for fuck’s sake! Where’s my boatman Charon?!
There isn’t one. No one knows what the fuck they’re doing and no god is out there looking after us from above. Alan Moore put it best: “The main thing that I learned about conspiracy theory, is that conspiracy theorists believe in a conspiracy because that is more comforting. The truth of the world is that it is actually chaotic. The truth is that it is not The Illuminati, or The Jewish Banking Conspiracy, or the Gray Alien Theory. The truth is far more frightening - Nobody is in control. The world is rudderless.” Conspiracy theorists and the religious - same thing. Both invent these preposterous hierarchies to give some meaning to a meaningless existence. What’s the difference between The Illuminati running the world and an all-powerful god fighting a hidden war against his own treacherous angels with human souls as the ultimate prize? The Illuminati makes slightly more sense.
I do want to point out that I think Jesus is a pretty badass character - like Superman with a humbler skillset. And if a person said they wanted to act like Jesus, not because they believed in a heaven whose property you purchase via good deeds, but because Jesus was a good guy and had a lot of good ideas. I’d support that any day. An atheist christian, basically. Then you could actually apply logic to the Bible. “If Jesus said love, charity, acceptance, and compassion, then the whole of Leviticus should probably be completely ignored.” An eyes-wide-open christian. I’d have a lot of respect for such a person. But it seems more tribal than anything to me, religion.
But I have no great wisdom to offer. When it comes to wisdom I’m my own refutation. There’s no book I can recommend, no self-help guru I trust or respect. I’m just as lost as everyone else.
All I can say with certitude is what Blue Rodeo sang better: “And if we’re lost / then we are lost together”. Pretty sure that fulfills our Canadian content quota.
JK: It's all CanCon all the time on this website; the CRTC ain't got shit on us. We've more than earned a few international hits, but my mom will really appreciate the Blue Rodeo - that's her favorite band.
How'd you figure out you wanted a PhD? That's not a decision someone just kinda comes to, is it?
ED: I dunno. I guess I know that I can’t get by in the real world. I ain’t a muggle, which means I have a choice between art and academia. The PhD covers all bases. Plus UNB now offers an expedited PhD program for Creative Writing. I’ve got the grades and am working on the accolades to qualify.
It’s a funny balance, though. Think of it this way: an artist requires celebrity and an academic requires reputation. One gains celebrity by doing shit like this - honest, uncultivated interviews, risk-taking… you rip out your heart and hold it high before the world. Anything less than the risk of death and you’ll wither beneath livelier vines. One gains reputation by NOT doing shit this way, but rather through careful, articulate responses and deliberate, well-considered academic contributions. One does not rock the boat; one reinforces it.
When you’re sloppy and let’s say emotionally clumsy as I am, celebrity is the easier of the two. It’s a quandary. Thankfully academia is something of its own solution - eccentricity, so long as it’s harmless and great to talk about at parties, is an asset. No one wants a writer in residence who’s boring, nor do they want one who is going to be featured in the Opinions section of the Washington Post. Unless it’s as an article. And it’s well received.
JK: What are these other accolades you're working on?
ED: For my own trajectory, the Direct Entry PhD program at UNB allows you to skip the master’s and go straight to the PhD. It requires a 4.0 minimum GPA and basically whatever else you can show that makes you competitive - for me that’s trying to win awards for my work. So far I’ve got the marks and I've won the Angela Auden Levine Memorial Book Award - it’s a UNB-specific creativity award. I think I won it due to a TV pilot I wrote, "Crisis, Inc." I’m hoping to pitch the series to Netflix or Amazon Prime, but getting access to someone to pitch to is a miserable ordeal. There’s too much competition for too little attention.
I think all writers need to more seriously consider working in TV format. The visual mediums have always been the most popular - Shakespeare wrote mainly plays, after all, and those are what people return to most. While there’s no real room for creativity in movies right now (at least in Hollywood - there are amazing things being done overseas), there’s loads of room for really interesting premises in Netflix and Amazon. It’s also a good paycheque if you can get steady work. While poetry is my passion at present (as is, apparently, alliteration), it don't earn squat. It’s the interpretive jazz bar you keep losing money on, but you fucking love interpretive jazz for some disturbed and hermetic reason so you work three jobs just to keep the joint alive.
JK: You've said of your writing that you want your readers "to weep like Alexander," and for professors to teach your poems. Now that comes from a context of something like you've died and there will never be another Eddie Dust release, but I'm wondering what it is specifically you want to leave people with. Is this a general goal for your writing career, or is there a thing - a message, an arc, a realization of subtext, a destructive climax, a moment, etc. - that you want to drop on a reader?
ED: That’s a complicated question.
I don’t have a specific agenda except to create. I want to wear both masks, so to speak. Comedy, tragedy, action, introspection, surrealism, I’ll try anything. I’m no guru and I’m not an advocate. I’m just a writer. I love wordplay and I love the variety and precision of English. It can be either beautiful or blunt or biblical. I think too few poets care about alliteration and rhyme. That shit can be devastating. I am always drawn to “Carrion Comfort” by Gerard Manley Hopkins. It’s an overflowing sink of alliteration and sound work. All that said I don’t want to churn out a bunch of forgettable bullshit that is popular in the moment.
If anyone remembers me, I want them to be inspired by me and not repulsed by me.
I guess if I had to push some kind of agenda it would be that there are many ways to be a polar man [I refuse the term “cis” - it sounds like cyst, and seriously, fuck that. Heteronormative is a goddamned mouthful. I like polar - it accepts the idea that sexuality is a spectrum and not an X or Y statement and is pretty clear that I mean heterosexual without being disparaging (I don’t like “straight” because the opposite is “crooked”, for example) I will say that I’m willing to hear any arguments one way or another - people forget that English is a living language and that these debates over what words to use are signs of a healthy and vibrant language].
Hemingway isn’t the only way to be tough, nor is he the best interpretation of the strong, stoic male. I think a lot of young men and boys are desperate for a healthy, masculine role model. I don’t imagine myself anyone’s role model, holy shit, no! But I’d like to be able to at least offer the world an alternative form of tough guy - something that doesn’t involve misogyny or destruction or conquest. Yes I’m big, I’m bald, I’m tough, and I’m scarred. But I also raise orchids and write love poems.
Consider Hugh Jackman. He was Wolverine. But he also sang musical numbers. That’s a much more versatile way of being a tough guy than has been allowed in the past. I want to expand on that with my own interpretation of healthy masculinity.
Assuming I’m healthy.
And you know what they say about ”assume"...
Continued in Part 2
JK: Charlotte, we have an advantage that I don't have with the other poets I'm speaking with in that you and I have gone to the same university. However, we're not from the same place. Tell me about Cape Breton.
CS: I assume you’re referring to the opening line in my presentation. I had elected to open with a joke, and I was quite proud of that one. There’s something admirable about subverted humour, but I digress.
I’m from the first town that one would arrive at after getting to the island, Port Hawkesbury; a small, simplistic, and supremely unremarkable location. Both of my parents grew up on the island, and they had decided to move there when I was around nine years old. My parents separated when I was thirteen, right around the time the local paper mill shut down, which was more or less the source of the town’s economy. My father had to move away for work. I was lucky enough to be raised by a wondrous mother, and I found a great group of friends as well.
My homeland is a popular target for romanticization, and it isn’t that hard to see why. I was never more than five minutes from a beach or a picturesque cliffside, and the musical culture of Cape Breton is nothing to shake a stick at; I shudder to imagine a world where I didn’t grow up listening to the Rankin Family.
And yet, my homeland wasn’t very special to me at all. I reckon this is a common theme when many of us talk about our hometowns; we become disenchanted with a location as locals, even if we enjoy living there. I think while my memories of home feel a bit bland, I’m thankful that I started small, because now I have so many more opportunities to be wowed by the ways of the “big city.” I found such joy in Fredericton, and I’m sure I’ll find even more when I move to Halifax.
JK: So you too are planning a move to Halifax? I've just been speaking with Heather Clark from the Original Poetry panel, and she's decided to make that her home after university.
CS: I'm not quite sure when it will happen. I anticipate it will be a couple years from now; I still have much left to do in Fredericton.
JK: What's drawn you there?
CS: Moving to an even bigger city is supremely appealing to me; more things to do, more things to see. My mother still lives in Cape Breton with my brother. Once he finishes his first year of college he'll be moving out, and my mother plans on selling the house and moving to Halifax after that happens. I want to go live with her and learn more about the woman who made me into the one I am today, and have some long-term mother-daughter time that we were never able to have while I was growing up.
JK: Your mother figures into your prose poem "Killing Myself Is A Bad Idea And I Can Prove It Mathematically." That poem deals in so many things: unmasking political bias in numbers and statistics, luck, reincarnation, gender dysphoria. It's loaded with suspense, but then near the end your mother shows up. You speak of her in terms of a lifelong educator. You must value her deeply.
CS: My mother is the most important person in the world to me. She taught me gratitude, how to speak my truth quietly and clearly, and to not look at life so seriously. I couldn't be happier to be following in her footsteps.
She's also been crucial in the more inaccessible parts of my transition. I wouldn't be on hormones if not for her presence; this time last year, I had given up all hope in the face of gatekeeping, but she spoke up for me when I couldn't, and now I'm one year on estrogen. She also paid for my laser sessions, without which I probably wouldn't be able to go outside without having a meltdown. So she's quite literally been the biggest reason that I've become the woman I am today.
It was important to me that she featured in that poem because she is one of my many reasons to continue living. Her presence plays nicely into the statistical portion of the poem. If I were to be reborn, there is a 100% chance that I would not have the mother I have right now, and the thought of growing up under a different mother genuinely frightens me. Not to say that other mothers are bad, of course, but I have my doubts that I would be able to replicate the person I've grown into if I had been raised by someone else. What's more, I could never put my mother through that sort of thing. As someone who has lost friends to suicide, I know the feeling all too well.
JK: So reincarnation is not just a theme for that section, but a part of your faith?
CS: I wouldn't say it's part of my faith. My mom raised us without religion, a choice I'm quite grateful for. She, however, is a very spiritual person, and I sort of just picked that up. Thus, the only thing I firmly believe is that there is something out there greater than us, but I don't attribute that to any particular entity or subsequent teachings. Even if I hadn't picked up such spirituality from my mother, I think it would be hard for me to believe otherwise; I remember crying before going to sleep one day, wishing I could see my friend who had taken his life a few months earlier, only to see him in a dream that same night. When you experience so many of those occurrences, you find it hard to not believe that there's a greater power than us.
I don't quite believe it, but I also don't rule reincarnation out. The idea has been with me for quite a while, and I use it to rationalize the age-old question of why the good die young. I have this idea that we're put on Earth to do a certain amount of good and/or become such a person that is a source of goodness, after which we'd be taken off the planet and get access to paradise or eternity, whatever that may be. Reincarnation, to me, was the way that our souls could continue doing good on Earth; if we didn't do enough in one life, we could continue in another, and another if we still didn't reach that goodness threshold, and so on. I rationalized that the good die young because they just needed a tiny bit of extra time to reach their goodness threshold, evidenced by the fact that they were good. If they only needed a little bit of time to reach that threshold, it stood to reason that they would be young in that life when they reached it, and it was no longer necessary for them to continue on Earth.
Nowadays, I humbly accept that we just don't know anything about what happens, and I think this is why humans fear death so much; we've no greater fear than the unknown. I suppose the presence of reincarnation in my poem is more of a what-if; a factor that may or may not be true, but one that I accept for the purposes of the calculations. I felt that this essence paired particularly well with the statistical nature of the poem.
JK: You alluded to your project's structure during your presentation, but I never quite got the scope. Could you tell me more about the sections you've organized your book into?
CS: I was aiming for a rough anthology of the human experience. The chapbook takes a look at the things we experience in life; the beauty we find in other people, the ugliness we find in other people, the inevitability of death, the regrets we carry with us, all the rest of it. A few sections are less widespread.
"In The Eye Of The Beholder" honours the people we love, or the people we may have loved in another life. These [poems] are for those people who, in one way or another, enchant our world.
"On Toxicity," quite blatantly, deals with the opposite. I wanted to bring that which harms us the most stealthily to light. The more exemplary poem for that goal was "The Weight Of Joy," which deals with toxic positivity.
"The War On Dopamine" unpacks the fear that come with emotion. My goal was to sort of personify anxiety, of which I was experiencing quite a bit during the time of writing. It was also important that the source of these fears were attached to another person; the fears of the less recognizable will come in a further draft.
"On Nature" is sort of a grabbag of all these things rolled into three poems with nature imagery. I was reluctant to deviate too much from the overall feel of the chapbook, but I don't think we should forget about the world that our experiences take place in either.
"Life As We Don't Know It" is a snapshot into a few theories I've had of the afterlife, in which the spirits of our loved ones still very much have a role in this world.
"On Blessings" deals with gratitude. The first two poems are more traditional, if I could even call them that, but the third one in this section is much different. My formula for this poem involved making a playlist of all my favourite songs, listening to each one, and writing down the first image I formed in my head while listening to it. I wound up with some delightfully quirky imagery, and perhaps readers may recognize their own chuckle as a form of gratitude.
"A Glass Of Wine With The Reaper" aims to be completely unapologetic about the reality of death. "Killing Myself Is A Bad Idea And I Can Prove It Mathematically" does this by toying with the idea of suicide, and eventually decides against it using something as detached, for lack of a better word, as statistics.
"On Regrets," also quite blatantly, deals with the regrets that we carry with us for however long, depending on the person, such as things we have said that may have destroyed an otherwise beautiful friendship, or wishing for even just a moment that you had breast cancer.
Finally, "To Honour An Old Friend" is about friends that we have lost. The visuals in "Vigil" represent the dialogue that the living and deceased may have in a dream.
JK: This book was also your senior project, right?
CS: It was my senior project, yes. I actually plan on auditing the course this coming school year to continue having that outlet to work on it.
JK: Did you start working on it in January or has this been in the works for a while?
CS: A bit of both. At least one poem in each of these sections was already drafted when I began working on the chapbook, and I used them as a starting point for what I wanted the section to capture.
JK: You and I both graduated from STU this year; since you're coming back, are you planning on doing a Certificate of Honours Standing, or are you just back to workshop your poetry more?
CS: I'm going back exclusively to work on this chapbook; I'll be auditing the Independent Project class with Andrew Titus, and nothing else. I'm not sure if an Honours certificate is something I want to do or not, because I think I do want to go to grad school at some point, and some people have told me that you need Honours for that, while others have said you don't, so I'm really not sure.
JK: I think it depends on the program you want to get into. If you're going back just for this though, what is it you can get from the class that you couldn't get from just sending new work to some trusted readers?
CS: Well, it's not to say that I wouldn't send my work out to fellow readers/writers in my area, in fact I'll probably also do that alongside this course. But I think the class offers a sort of formal, organized structure for this exact task. I think having that one group dedicated to improving this project, not to mention having it being led by Andrew Titus, would be a supreme asset to its improvement.
JK: No arguments there. I think I know someone who'll be joining that class as an Independent Study so they can complete their "Minor in Titus."
CS: Ah yes, I know exactly who you're referring to; they have also said that same thing to me.
JK: Was poetry or creative writing in general something you did before university, or was that something you took to once you got to STU?
CS: The first memory I have of engaging with creative writing was around middle school where I joined a wiki called Fantendo; the articles on this wiki were all fan-made video games and characters. I had to stop spending so much time on the website once I got to high school because I had been struggling with math, but I didn't ever really stop writing.
I credit my Grade 9 English teacher, Mrs. Morgan, for my interest in English. She read all of my papers and creative writing assignments, and I remember during a parent-teacher conference, she told my mother "Charlotte has a talent that cannot be taught." Needless to say, that was an incredible motivator. I dabbled in spoofing "Twas The Night Before Christmas" into a track team motivation poem as well as a grad variety show piece, but beyond that I never really ended up running away with it before university.
During my second year I started noticing how much I loathed my journalism classes and how much I loved my English classes. It wasn't until I took the creative writing course with Kathy Mac that I discovered a knack for poetry. I had no idea what drew me to it, and I'm still admittedly a bit blurry. My best guess is the freedom that it could give me; compared to prose or scripts, poetry let me do all kinds of crazy and stupid things with not only the form and the structure, but with the kinds of phrases and words I could use as well. I don't anticipate a short story could have a title like "Introspections From A Wannabe Bohemian Who Doesn't Deserve The Shit She's About To Go Through."
Nowadays I do a bit of everything; I've created so many worlds in my head that I want to turn into a book or book series. I have two scripts on the go, one of which I plan on submitting to NotaBle Acts next summer, and of course, my prized possession, my poetry chapbook.
JK: I'm fascinated with the range of tools and structures we have for telling stories. I'm curious, what pushed you away from journalism?
CS: I wasn't fond of how journalism courses tended to be structured at STU. I found they had a very "trial-and-error" structure, by which I mean we would write/shoot our first assignment with little to no instruction, we likely got bad marks on them as a result, and we used those mistakes as reminders on how to improve the assignments the next time around. That first assignment still went on our transcripts. That coupled with a few professors I didn't gel very well with made me fairly unimpressed with the program. I made some absolutely wonderful friends in those classes, so I don't regret taking them, but journalism just wasn't for me. I prefer to be in charge of my own writing, too.
JK: The way you've told your story in this discussion sounds like you've had your journey; like, you've made it through the other side of something really hard — made it through the epilogue and now we're at the back cover. That's not meant to be a call out or anything because I've definitely spoken in similar terms before.
CS: Truthfully, many of the things I speak about in the chapbook aren't in the past: dysphoria, fascinations with humans and death, and social/intimate frustration are still very real parts of my life. So I wouldn't quite say that that particular journey is over yet. That being said, I think it's of utmost importance to be able to look at these sorts of things with a sort of introspective, borderline-objective viewpoint, especially if you identify with them. My personal definition of intelligence is one's ability to distinguish between what they feel, what they think, what they understand, and what they believe, all while not being dismissive of the power and importance of what they feel.
JK: You've graduated from STU, you're working on this chapbook, you're thinking about grad school, and you want to move close to your mom. I think we've got a good sense of what's next for you, but I'm wondering what's happening now. What do the present and near future look like for you?
CS: Right now, I think I'm going to try and be as gentle with my life as I can. I'm getting a new apartment and will be finding work here in [Fredericton]. I think I'm going to take my time and do some reading, writing, and other leisurely, introverted activities while I wait for my surgery referral, after which I think my life as I know it will feel somewhat complete.
JK: I'd really love to get a recommendation from everyone I speak with. What should I run out and get right now?
CS: As an avid gamer I have three recommendations. The first isn't a video game, but a Netflix series called Tales of the City. It's rather difficult to explain the plot, but never in my life have I experienced a show that made me feel so visible. In a nutshell, it's stories about a group of predominantly-queer people who all live in an apartment building in San Francisco. Its representation is near flawless, it's sex-positive to a point where it's matter-of-fact, and on top of all the feel-good vibes it gives off, it reminds us just how much these alternative lifestyles had to and continue to be fought for. It also gets bonus points from me for casting Ellen Page as a lead.
I am not a fan of turn-based role-playing games for the most part. But there's not a single element in Persona 5 that doesn't have an alluring aura to it; the music is fantastic, the story has me enchanted, and the gameplay is sort of an RPG/Social Simulator/Dungeon Crawler, so it's a refreshing spin on genre. I'll toss in a bonus recommendation for Wonder Boy: The Dragon's Trap, which is an old game from the SNES era, but was recently remastered on the Switch. I'm extremely critical of video games, but Wonder Boy is an absolute masterpiece that was far ahead of its time.
JK: Japanese role-playing games are something I've been meaning to get more into for the last little while — never had the patience for them when I was a kid. I've heard nothing but good things for Persona 5. The Dragon's Trap, though, is something that's been on my radar for a while, and is much more my speed. And I'll definitely queue-up Tales of the City once I'm through with Neon Genesis Evangelion. Thank you so much.
Just one more thing, though: why with the two Is in Riiality?
CS: To quote Sheldon Cooper: "What's life without whimsy?"
Author's publications in The East: http://www.theeastmag.com/author/charlotte-simmons/
I thought about you while
eating lunch today.
Not to say you look like
a messy home-made pizza that
required two spatulas to
fish out of the toaster
oven, but then again,
it made me warm inside.
I wonder how you’re doing,
if you’ve been telling the
world to talk to the hand or
if the world has been gnawing
it off. I know it can be hard
to tell the difference.
I’m curious to know what’s
touched your eyes and ears
and how many of those things
have touched your heart since
we last spoke. Your stories are
the lemon kick in your voice of honey,
steeped in sugar reminding
me you understand.
I thought about you because
my drinks haven’t been very
warm this week. I’ve had apple
juice that serves to convince
my tongue that my lunch isn’t
too hot, and water that keeps
me alive, however unsatisfying.
I guess what I’m trying to say is,
thank you for saving me a seat
Used with permission of the author.
So we had our New Brunswick Book Awards back in May, and the winner of the poetry prize was Jenna Lyn Albert for her collection Bec & Call. I knew that at some point I would have to read it. She's Fredericton's poet laureate, and she also hosted an open mic event at The Abbey restaurant in downtown Fredericton for the Annual Atlantic Undergraduate English Conference. I didn't need to have my arm stretched to read her book, but it definitely seems like the right thing to do considering, well, everything about my job.
I, uh, I gotta say though, I wasn't prepared for this book. It's quite a lot. It's candid, and funny at times, shocking at others, and direct. I really enjoyed it. But that wasn't what struck me the hardest about it. No, it was that I lived and grew up in one of the settings she uses.
Her poem "Unnamed" (pp. 84-85) takes place on Albert Street and Connaught Street in Fredericton. I moved into a house on Albert Street with my family when I was six years old. We moved out when I was 16. I'm not gonna go into full detail about my childhood there but it was a welcoming neighborhood. Our next door neighbours would look after kids after school while their parents were at work, and they let us play in their backyard whenever we wanted. Their daughters used to babysit my me and my brothers. Our own backyard bordered a right-of-way with a lot of trees, and connected us with another closeby neighborhood, including a particular childhood friend. I had a paper route there, and I took it over from a kid who lived a few doors down from mine, and whose family was good friends with my mine. Actually a lot of people around there knew my mom and dad. And if all this weren't enough of a weird connection to Albert's poem, I was a French Immersion student at Connaught Street Elementary School. I also went to Albert Street Middle School, which is now a YMCA.
Why am I telling you this? Because I'm actually working on a critical analysis of that poem. I don't know if it'll go up - I might be the managing editor but I'm not all-powerful - but in case it does, I needed to clear the air a bit. The poem uses that location to do certain things, and I'm gonna talk about those things on that level. They don't paint the street in a good light, but there's a reason for it. Or rather, it paints a kind of sinister idealness for a highly Anglicized town like Fredericton and the effect that has on Francophones. I really, really love this poem, especially the framing device it uses. And I'm absolutely going to discuss these things more fully in the analysis. But I also loved living on Albert Street, and I couldn't just talk about it in the poem's terms.
- Jamie Kitts
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